my whole script

I plan to do a silent opening film with just music and sound effects sounding. It will start with the start of a un-copyrighted eerie violin song. While showing a little bit of the setting from a high angle of the deteriorated streets some credits in a clear and white font showing some of the less important credits. Then we are shown a medium shot of the back of a building that has a door on it, 5 seconds passes by and then we see a girl running with a white shirt full of blood and  messy hair, with the makeup ruined. This is for the audience to infer that there was a tragedy happening. This whole shot will be in slow mo in order for the audience to notice the tragedy and the drama of the girl.